There are many similarities and differences between the two main character , Tris from the novel of Divergent and Katniss from the novel of The Hunger Game.It is by far that Katniss is way more stronger competitor. First of all , they both are brave, but Katniss is more brave than Tris. This is because Katniss volunteer for her sister, Prim , knowing that if she enters the hunger game she will die. It shows on the novel that this is what Katniss thought to herself “I can’t win. Prim must know that in her heart. The competition will be far beyond my abilities.”(Collins p.34) On the other hand, Tris was brave because she volunteered to jumped off the building first to an unknown place, but deep inside she knew that she won’t die anyway. “This is a scare tactic. I will land safely at the bottom.”(Roth p.58) The other reason that support the idea that Katniss is way more stronger competitor than Tris is that Katniss knows how to use more variety of weapons because she was a hunter when he father died. While Tris only know how to use gun while Katniss is really good with bow and arrow and more things. It said on “ The arrow skewers the apple in the pig’s mouth and pins it to the wall behind it.” (Collins p.97) The third reason would be that Katniss has gone through lots of hardship , she almost starved to death , without Peeta breads she would suffer more.(Collins p. 27) On the other hand , Tris grown up in Abnegation. Her family was not poor like Katniss’s family so she was well fed. In conclusion , Katniss is more physically stronger than Tris in most of the way.
You might want to restate your reasons in your conclusion but other than that you explained all of your reasons clearly and have all the parts of TREE. Nice Job!!
ReplyDeleteYou might want to restate your reasons in your conclusion but other than that you explained all of your reasons clearly and have all the parts of TREE. Nice Job!!
ReplyDeleteReflection : I think I did well on using TREE as a structure of my paragraph but it would've been better if I try to use more powerful words and try to use self statements and maybe check for grammar errors to make my paragraph better.
ReplyDeleteYou did well on explaining your reason. I really like that you use text from the book as your evidence to support your reason. I think you should add more on your conclution.
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