In both the novels of The Hunger Games and Divergent, both the main characters in these books were controlled. But one of them is the stronger competitor because Katniss knows how to use weapons. Tris is in a community that you were not allowed to use weapons at all and also Katniss's society. For the sake of her family, she risk her life to go outside into the illegal area to hunt for animals by using her father's bow which he had left for her after he got blown up. Katniss is also the better competitor because she knows how to survive because if she believes in herself that she will survive she will never die. Tris does not know how to survive as better as Katniss because she is restricted in her faction and never leave. The last reason is that Katniss brave and is willing to sacrifice herself for her family. We know this because Katniss volunteered for her sister after her sister was chosen for The Hunger Games. Tris is in a different faction than her family so she only cares about herself most of the time. Now we know that Katniss is by far the stronger competitor because she know how to use weapons, she knows how to survive, and she is brave and willing to sacrifice herself for her family.
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I have all the part of TREE.
I restate my reasons in my ending.
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I can improve my paragraph by explaining my reasons more clearly and give some examples to support my reasons.
You have included all parts of TREE. Also, you have specific examples. Might want to underline the titles.
ReplyDeleteI really like how you use TREE correctly but a little more detail would be good
ReplyDeleteYou should have better transitions
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