Tuesday, February 10, 2015

Katniss and Tris, comparison (Teetat)

Katniss vs Tris
In the fictional stories, “The Divergent”, and “The Hunger Games (Catching Fire)”, there were 2 main character we chose to compare the similar traits and different. From overall Katniss is clearly stronger that Tris. Both of them have very similar Traits and very different. The similar traits are, they have tough life. Tris had tough life when she was an initiate in Dauntless, Katniss also had a hard time surviving in District 12. But both of them also have different traits, and Katniss had more tougher life than Tris had. She had to hunt in order to get food, she have to take care of her mother and sister, sometimes she doesn’t even have food to eat. But Tris, she had family (came from Abnegation), and food to eat.
In both of this fictional stories, Katniss is clearly stronger than Tris because she had gone through a lot of hardship than Tris. Katniss is a survivor while Tris is like a student but with tough fighting teachers. Katniss almost starved to death because their family is very poor. Katniss physical body is stronger because she often sneak out the district and hunt. She used the bow and arrow as her weapon and you need to be very accurate to use it so it take time to practice, but Katniss had a lot of experience in hunting with bow and arrow. Bow and arrow are heavy to carry because I carried one before, so you must be very strong like Katniss to hold, but guns are easy to use. She is also braver than Tris because she volunteer to the Hunger games instead of Prim, when she knows that she is likely going to die. The last reason she is stronger because she is a stealth hunter, because he can sneak up, and kill enemy, when Tris need to have Four by her side and tell her what to do. So, overall Katniss is clearly stronger than Tris.



5 comments:

  1. There's 2 things I did well on this 2 paragraph. The first reason is that I have a great topic sentences and the second reason is that I have good reasons.

    The one thing I wish to improve is my ending.

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  2. You have good reasons and good explanations, but you should check your grammar.

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  3. I think you did a good job but it was kind of confusing the way you highlighted them and you were supposed to include every detail in 1 paragraph

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  4. I like your paragraph, it is easy to understand why you chose Katniss to be stronger than Tris. You had information in the reasons and clearly followed TREE. Maybe underline your book titles.

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  5. I think you have all the parts of TREE but you might want to tell us what the other parts of your paragraph that isn't highlighted is all about. Other than that you did a very good job!!!

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