Although both Tris from The Divergent and Katniss from The Hunger Games may share some similarities, they also contain their own identities and differences from others. By comparing the differences that they contain and their strength or background, you can see that Katniss is by far way stronger than Tris. Comparing to others, she is very brave as you can see that she volunteered for Prim to go to the Hunger Games when she knew that she will probably die but she did it to save her sister’s life. However Tris might contain some bravery but she’s not as brave as Katniss, since she jumped of the building but she knew that there must be something under the hole since they wouldn’t kill the initiates before they will start to the training. Katniss’ background history helped her to become a stronger competitors since she must be the one to provide food for the whole family and her dad taught her how to shoot a bow. Tris barely know how to use different weapons. Katniss must be a very hard competitor to face with, since her bow accuracy is really high because she shot into the eye of a squirrel and the apple in the pig. As you can see, Katniss is a more skilled and experienced competitor from many different things such as bravery, sad history and experience with weapons.
Really nice paragraph although you forgot to underline the book titles.
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ReplyDeleteI think that the two main positive things that I did is that I used TREE to use as a structure for my paragraph. I also used some of the self statements to check for the reasons of the paragraph and its structure. However, I think that I should be improving my explanation sentences and create a clearer paragraph with better grammar for a better understanding of the readers.
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ReplyDeletewhere you highlight your red it really sounds like you're explaining the reason
ReplyDeletewhere you highlight your red it really sounds like you're explaining the reason
ReplyDeleteI like your paragraph and you used TREE effectively. You gave good reasons why you choose Katniss to be the stronger one.
ReplyDeleteWish- Underline your book titles.
Jett