Tuesday, February 10, 2015
Harry Tris v Katniss Paragraph
From both books, Katniss and Tris have showed similar and different traits but the plot from The Hunger game is much more cruel making Katniss a better competitor than Tris. Katniss is an expert at bow and she proves her expertise at bow by always piercing the arrow into the animal’s eye. she lives in a poor community with low food supply, her father is dead and her mother is mentally ill so Katniss has to hunt for food to feed the family. The outstanding point that proves why Katniss is a better competitor than Tris is that Katniss is not fear of death. Katniss is willing to sacrifice her life for her beloved sister by sacrificing to go to The Hunger Games. Tris have never experience any starvation or desperation before, therefore it makes Katniss mentally and physically stronger.
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I think that you did a great job using Tree as a formation for your paragraph. I like your topic sentence. Your paragraph is also easy to follow and contain reasons with explanations. However, I think you should be working on your capitalisation such as the name of the book and the start of the sentence. Nice job!
ReplyDeleteI don't think I mentioned any examples about Tris because I gave only the good examples about Katniss. But however I did get my structure right and I just Let it go
ReplyDeleteLet it go! Let it go! Can't hold it back anymore! Can't hold it back anymore! Let it go, let it go! Turn away and slam the door!
DeleteI think that you wrote a fairly good essay since you included all parts of TREE. However, you should write more. But, you have a good ending.
ReplyDeleteI don't think I mentioned any examples about Tris because I gave only the good examples about Katniss. But however I did get my structure right and I just Let it go
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