In divergent, the theme is that believing in yourself is the best way to be good at something. It is this theme because in the book, Tris had to admit to herself that she is divergent. The second reason of why believing in yourself is the best way to be good at something is that when Tris had the most points in the tris had the most points during the training. She gained confidence from that. My third reason is when during the training the Dauntless initiates had to be picked to have a match and Tris and four climbed up the ferris wheel to see where was Eric’s team was. And they found where they were hiding the flag. My last reason is when Tris was left behind and she had to run to the train. She gained confidence and believed in herself. From that and she got in the train.
There are lots of grammar issues but your theme was clear and you have reasons to support it
ReplyDeleteYou have a lot of grammar issues. However, you had a good theme and supporting evidence.
ReplyDeleteYou have a lot of grammar issues. However, you had a good theme and supporting evidence.
ReplyDeleteI think it would be better if you use direct quotes to support your reasons and I think you should end your paragraph by concluding it but I like your theme statement.
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