Tuesday, November 25, 2014
The Amazing Utopia
The world that a lot of people have been dreaming of is the world where everyone is smiling. The world without blood, conflict and war will make all of us cheerful. I wish a world for when I wake up, the transfixed sunlight will shine at me and I am fresh and excitedly ready for school. Also I would like a world where no one gloats or brag because it's not cool. No one will do anything to try to hurt or harm us. No one in the world will have to sleep hungry and eat frugally. I really hope that this will be real someday and I am not being sarcastic. If this world really did exist then no one have to feel bereaved or any bad feeling that they don't deserve. As I walk down the street I greet my neighbors joyfully and they greeted back.
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I like how you make the Utopian society realistic and you used four vocab words. Try to write more about the story next time
ReplyDeleteGood job on the vocab words. Also, you include literary devices like personification. However, you might want to be more specific about what you want the world to be like. It's just too general.
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