The varieties smell of food started to inspire and enjoy me. I feel grateful and thankful to the leader that he celebrate the end of each month with a joyful buffet. Life is such immortal, where nothing is irreparable. Each of the house will has at least one medication machine where it will cure and alleviate the pain. Life is complex and there's no point to be apprehensive. Every morning, I can touch and feel the freshness that run through my body. Many people started to emigrate into our community but sadly you need to reach requirements to be able to emigrate in and have a wonderful life. Looking through the window, I see the exquisite sight of the sea, where I can reach the horizontal with my mind. I remembered the sound of water rush into the shore and scour the rocks. We are under the leader's protection, where planes are not allow to rush over the community without permissions. I can feel the luckiness inside my thoughts and I'm sure that everyone has that feeling too. Not every community will be able to give free education, free food, varies of protection and more wonderful things. People that live in here will not have poverty and will be able to find a job easily. The thoughts of moving away from this community is no where to be found in each of the community's members. There are no accidents and death rate but each day, the population increased by 10. 10 babies will born each day. This place is just too wonderful to be true.
Your Utopian society is very interesting especially the part where you have to reach certain requirements to join. I think that you could improve your sentences for example the first sentence would be better if it was 'The different varieties and smells of the food presented before me was inspiring and very enjoyable.'
ReplyDeleteYour utopia is very unique and I like how you use the new vocabularies we learn but however you are sort of also writing it as dystopia also
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