Tuesday, November 25, 2014
My Utopia Pou
Such a beautiful place this is, no killing, no violence. Everything was perfect and exquisite here: everyone have the right to choose and not get treated like slaves, there is nothing called pollution here or cutting down trees and not growing them back. All the people that live here all have a smile on their faces and had good behaviors such as they will not put people down they will only pull people up if anyone have any trouble. The people that make mistakes will not receive chastisement or clamored at, they will get another chance to fix what they have done wrong. There are dinosaurs and mythical creatures roaming around but will not eat or kill anyone. Such perfect, living in this utopian world will not make me want to ever go back to the normal we use to live in. No acid rain or any natural disasters. Why can't people create this kind of world instead of having war and fight against each other? I will live in this kind of world where there are good people and exquisite environment, I will be the happiest person ever.
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I like how you create the setting of the Utopian society realistic and you included dinosaurs! Try to include more vocab words.
ReplyDeleteI really like how you include many different topics and characteristics of your Utopia society. I also liked how you use different vocabulary from the list in this paragraph. However, you need to work on the structure of the paragraph and sentence. Some of the sentence doesn't really make sense.
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