Monday, December 1, 2014
Dew's Memory
I remembered when I was eight years old, I went to HuaHin with my family, it was my first time but not for other people. I was so happy that I couldn't wait to reach the place, I think to myself that if I got there it must be afternoon already because already the sun had started it's rotation and was covered by an enormous fluffy cloud. As we reach the place, I was so excited and I could see all the sea curling around with no endings. At that moment the sea was really fresh and clear that I can see through the water and see the colorful tiny fishes winkling its' tail up and down. I quickly tell my driver to stop the car and drop me near the shore first. As I jumped off the car taking a deep breath, the smell of salty crooking pieces of sand went into my nose. Arr choo! My nose hurts. Then I take off the shoes and went deeper to touch the cool glistering water. As I remembered when I closely stepped my toes closer to feel the water I could hear the cracking of sharp crystal beneath my toes. I peaked down and see a minimize giraffe facing downward. Actually it was a giraffe's patterned shell. I was surprised and by the time the sun lower it's power and flashy disappeared.
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I like your sensory details I can visualize that scene, and I also like your use of vocabs :)
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