I closed my eyes for the night into my slumber. I found myself transfixed by the surreal giant spider spinning it's webs around me. The web was pretty much cultivated beforehand. The morose sentiments of the demised victims must have gone the moment their soul left their body. Some, would still be roaming around the furry giant Halloween doll like spider in the form of apparitions. There were also agitators in the place. In fact, there were more than one but more than you can count. I wanted to scream but too scared to do so because there is a big chance the huge spider would eat me right away so I remained still and stoic. It would be very sarcastic for another victim in this place to clamor out that they are too yummy to eat. The spider suddenly turned and bared it's poisonous fangs in my direction. This, I thought was a splice between life and death. My eyes fluttered open in the morning sun. The light feeling made me feel like this was a resurgence or something like that. If I happened to live that rouge and surreal incident, I would have gloated to the hundreds of spider that I had lived. This was ludicrous. But what if this was real? what if ?
- there was a loud bang on the door-
I like when you write most of the sentence using the vocabulary words. You described a lot of the feeling and emotion in each of your sentence that really makes me feel that I'm in the story.Very fun story and I like it. :)
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