Tuesday, October 28, 2014

B day writing Harry

A repercussion happened in the night.

The boy who was fear of his demise, hides under his blanket. It was an exquisitely cold night and the protagonist couldn't sleep. The cold wind blushes his hair. But under his blanket there was a transfixed light. Yes, the boy is playing his Iphone under the blanket. Suddenly, a perilous person slowly opened the door and see a light under the blanket. The boy noticed the sound of footsteps so he quickly feigned. But unluckily, the perilous person was not stupid, she opened the blanket and confiscated the phone. What happens after that will be the consequences of the young boy. the boy learned that: "Don't play with your phones at night"

2 comments:

  1. I really like how you link all of the sentence and vocab together

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  2. Harry not bad. I think you overflowed the vocabulary words at the start but you could has spread some out

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