Thursday, August 28, 2014

Arrival on Himmel Street Kwan


Breaking news


Wartime is heating up the land and people have died, this sad incident happened on the train with two orphans who were separated from their parents by life and death. A young girl Liesel Meminger and a six year old boy Werner travelling with a mother.They are heading towards Munich, to their new home and their new parents, foster parents. However, on the way there, the boy Werner had not survived the trip and passed out in the cold. He had been buried outside where the train had stopped. When the train went on and got to Himmel street, Liesel got into the car and sat quietly. Poor girl, she must still be in shock of how her brother had died earlier while she had arrived safely at the Hubermanns' feeling sorry that he didn't get to know how nice their new family was.

1 comment:

  1. Keep an eye on the verb tenses in your writing. You want to make sure you are consistent with them or the reader may get confused.

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