BREAKING NEWS: Liesel Meminger arrived on Himmel street!
After the death of her little brother on the train, they arrived at himmel street her foster mother took the book thief to her new home. The buildings seemed to be glue together. She tried to sneak into the gate and Hans hubermann, her step father stopped her by one hand. He had a suitcase was a small book, the grave digger's handbook-a twelve step guide to grave-digging-success.
This is a bit confusing because you jump around too much and do not clearly write your ideas down. You need to think of the audience as never having read the book and you need to give this sliver of info in a smooth, clear manner.
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