Leisel's arrival at the Hubermanns
When Leisel went to bury her brother she met one of the gravediggers who eventually drops a book and Liesel picks it up. Liesel’s new mom and dad live on Himmel Street. Liesel meets her new parents, Rosa and Hans. She had to stay with her new parents because her mother is sick and her dad is taken away to be a communist or something. Liesel has a nightmare about her dead brother. She wakes up at night and screamed, but then her step father would come and comfort her. One night after the Nazi Party Liesel had another nightmare about her dead brother again and she wets her bed. Her step dad came to make the bed and he found a book that liesel got from the gravedigger, the book is called “The Grave Digger’s Handbook.”
This is a bit confusing because you jump around too much. You need to think of the audience as never having read the book and you need to give this sliver of info in a smooth, clear manner.
ReplyDeleteAlso, check your verb tenses.