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The book thief, Liesel Meminger, and her brother were traveling to Munich. She dreamed about Adolf Hitler. After, the dream her brother, Werner, died. They were drop in a town on the way to Munich to bury Werner. The gravedigger dropped a book from his pocket, The Grave Digger's Handbook, and Liesel took it. Then, they continue their journey to a town called Molching and live on the Himmel Street with Hans and Rosa Hubermann but Liesel didn't want to get out of the car until Hans Hubermann take her out in a quiet way. I think, she's happy and sad at the same time because her brother just died so she's feeling sad. After meeting the Hubermann at the Himmel Street, I think she should be feeling happy because she met Hans and Rosa Hubermann. Hans Hubermann is a nice and gentle person.
Keep an eye on the verb tenses in your writing. You want to make sure you are consistent with them or the reader may get confused.
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