Your infographic is great and the timeline and the events of the revolution sort of makes sense, but there are a few things you are missing to make your infographic better. The main thing is that you have talk about how the French revolution impacted the world and how it changed the world specifically. Great job! :)
You might want to show what's the society like before the revolution with specific explanation. Your topic is okay, but you might want to make it more interesting. You did use a logical way of explanation which is timeline but you might want to add more information outside of the timeline to provide more view of the transition. Your font is appropriate but you might want to use more colours to create more feeling like red to represents the intense of the revolution. The amount of text is okay.
Your infographic is great and the timeline and the events of the revolution sort of makes sense, but there are a few things you are missing to make your infographic better. The main thing is that you have talk about how the French revolution impacted the world and how it changed the world specifically. Great job! :)
ReplyDeleteYou might want to show what's the society like before the revolution with specific explanation. Your topic is okay, but you might want to make it more interesting. You did use a logical way of explanation which is timeline but you might want to add more information outside of the timeline to provide more view of the transition. Your font is appropriate but you might want to use more colours to create more feeling like red to represents the intense of the revolution. The amount of text is okay.
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